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1st Dec 2011, 3:06 PM

Dewdee

I'll be taking a break for December now that Act 1 is through. I will be spend it by relaxing, gathering ideas and source material.

Stay tuned for Act 2 in January!

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1st Dec 2011, 3:24 PM

hrwilliams

Aw man. That slogan up there is just the cutest. "Anypony."

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2nd Dec 2011, 7:10 PM

anzul

great so far! :)
see ya in january :D

-you should try to do a short side comic(not-so-grindmark) and send it to equestria daily, that may get you more watchers >:D

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2nd Dec 2011, 7:58 PM

Dewdee

I suppose I could, we'll see :) Right now I've got my hands full, but who knows what happens in the future.

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4th Dec 2011, 1:02 PM

anzul

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4th Dec 2011, 1:02 PM

anzul

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4th Dec 2011, 1:05 PM

anzul

sorry for that coment....

aniway,im glad to hear that :)

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4th Dec 2011, 9:52 AM

nomyriad

I really like this! Very curious to see where it is going <:

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4th Dec 2011, 11:00 AM

Creegos

Hah, this was very good. Better than I expected, for sure. Can't wait for more!

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4th Dec 2011, 11:15 AM

Wisdom Thumbs

I have no idea how you pulled that off, but this comic was more emotional than I was expecting. Especially since it's apparently a parody.

Now I can't wait to see Act 2!

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4th Dec 2011, 3:02 PM

Guest

that was glorious. continue this way.
i am just wondering how you'll do the second part... will you continue to use panel from the show following an episode( probably season 2 first episode) or will you draw/put together panels from differents episode and make up something that doesn't follow an episode storyline?

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4th Dec 2011, 4:37 PM

Dewdee

I am lazy at drawing, but crazy at photoshopping. I'll be mixing up different episodes together to deliver a new story. Probably with a larger frequency than what was used in this act.

Right now I am especially looking at the episodes with temporary antagonists like Griffon the Brush-off, Boast Busters and Dragonshy to give some action while looking into episodes like Fall Weather Friends and Party of One for character development.

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4th Dec 2011, 3:09 PM

anzul

hey!!! this got in EQD! AGAIN!! the coments are prety mixed reactions, and a constant trolling betwen discord and a bombardreun guy there lol

to the point!: some people have a few good points, like the characterizations; in the future, try to give something to the characters that they can truly care about, so then you can crush it and then they can go bersek >D

examples?:

-rarity worked her ass off all of her life to have the boutique
-applejack has her familie and theyr FATHERS farm :)
-pinkie pie has gummy and.... idk
-rainbow dash has a marefriend (why not?? lol ) or scootaloo... pssshhh- rainow factory ;)
-fluttershy... idk... she dont treat her animals very well.... what could she hold dear...??
-twilight sparkle hates everything :)

what i mean whit all of this is, try to give some more dimension to the characters.

(now i raelize that 50 pages are not enough for that, fail-me)

and plz, plz, plz, plzzzzz when act 2 starts let us know that luna is not dead after all!! plzzzzzzzz
it would be so fun!!!

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4th Dec 2011, 4:55 PM

Dewdee

Characters coming back from the dead right now feels like a long shot, sorry :P I am as much of a Lunatic as you and a while back I was juggling if I should give Luna a comeback since it could work nicely thanks to Luna Eclipsed providing the perfect material for it. However bringing her back from the dead would kind of render Act 1 pointless and the consequences of death a lot lighter. When a pony dies, he/she will be dead.

As for character development, yeah the other ponies need to stand out more. Right now they've all just had their brief introductions as nothing more than potentially murderous and scheming ponies. Cutiemark Chronicles are the source of ideas and reasoning for my character development. The brief mention of Applejack's parents dying in a terrific freak incident will be played out a bit further for example. Rather not give away too much though :)

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6th Dec 2011, 7:18 PM

anzul

well to that i just can say :/....

YAAYYYY!!!
hehe have a good decenber :D

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6th Dec 2011, 7:43 PM

Dewdee

Thanks, you too!

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10th Dec 2011, 5:02 AM

Geust

"and plz, plz, plz, plzzzzz when act 2 starts let us know that luna is not dead after all!! plzzzzzzzz
it would be so fun!!!"

D00d, she just got shredded into pieces.

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4th Dec 2011, 3:33 PM

Maklak

This comic was once on another www page, and there were a few posts about something being fundamentally wrong with Equestria, and why males are absent, stupid or submissive.

This fanfic kinda gives a reason for that: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/12/story-why-didnt-ah-stay-at-th-farm.html Males are scared of "that time of the year", and those who haven't been put in a dungeon for Princesses personal use and didn't run away are just scared. (this was a crackpot theory ofc.)

I'm glad this made it to EQD a second time, You'll get more readers.

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4th Dec 2011, 4:27 PM

Schrikvis

My prediction is...



The mole's derpy.

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23rd Dec 2011, 1:34 PM

Sorain

I belive there is no mole. Saying there is was a tactic of Celestia's to prevent Twilight from trusting the others enough to use the Elements against her. A temporary solution, but an efficent one.

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31st Dec 2011, 11:44 PM

Guest

The mole is obviously Spike. According to Faust, (until invalidated by canon) Celestia raised Spike after he was born and then gave him to Twi. Enough time to brainwash him.

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31st Dec 2011, 11:48 PM

Guest

Oops, never mind. I checked pg. 49 again. It can't be Spike, since the mole was in NMM's ranks. Oopsies!!

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4th Dec 2011, 6:39 PM

Ben

What?! What?!?! NOOOOOOOO! Please continue this it's awesome!

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4th Dec 2011, 10:25 PM

FamusJamus

Aww, now I have two pony webcomics to follow...

Not that I'm complaining or anything.

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4th Dec 2011, 11:53 PM

Best Pony

I just fucking got addicted! T_T
Oh well, time to bookmark this and wait for January I suppose. This is already awesome as hell, please make act 2 as grimdark-ish as possible. I love these more serious looks at Equestria for some reason. That's why I also can't wait for S2E10.

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5th Dec 2011, 1:04 AM

Dewdee

Glad to hear that! Yeah, I'm also looking forward to that one.

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5th Dec 2011, 6:59 AM

Neuron

The same goes for me.

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6th Dec 2011, 7:49 PM

Non7

Let me say thx to you
to begin with.....
I'll leave this
(\_/)
(o_0)
(^ ^)
Bunny as a reword!
even thou this story deserves
so much more ^_^
...scrue celestia... you rule =D

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7th Dec 2011, 7:49 PM

Dewdee

I am grateful for this rabbit.

I'd like to thank my parents, family and and friends for always supporting me no matter what! You made all this possible. Without you I never would've received this ASCII rabbit! Thank you everyone!

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8th Dec 2011, 11:10 PM

TheDarkBronyCyperAleksi

This comic pretty much clarified what I already knew.

Ponies are the reincarnation of evil.
Slenderman, creepypasta pokemons, rake etc? Ponies win them 5-0.

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14th Dec 2011, 2:21 PM

Dewdee

Ponit on pahoja.

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16th Dec 2011, 12:41 AM

weed is gud

i love gettin high and reading this comic lulz

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21st Dec 2011, 8:09 AM

Jes

Just found you from EQD and I have to say good job. Somehow you have made a simultaneously funny and intriguing comic. It reminds me a lot of DM of the Rings and Darths & Droids, except you're going the opposite route of making funny material serious. Yeash long winded comment, anyways, great work can't wait for the continuation.

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21st Dec 2011, 4:23 PM

Dewdee

Thanks! I recommend checking this if you like those that DnD style stuff http://friendshipisdragons.thecomicseries.com/

Stumbled upon it a bit after starting this. Most of the DnD humour is lost to me though :D

I'm not sure if this comic is making funny into serious necessarily, I'd just say the tone of humour was changed towards black humour and parody. Of course it's all in the eye of the reader and I'm not intentionally going for either.

Another long winded message :P

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9th Jul 2013, 6:51 AM

Ditzy

I would really just kill Celestia for not trying to helps filly twilight. I wouldn't even take her stupid class. I would run off with baby spike or on my own to find my way out of tears. Loosing parents cause of a dumb sun princess was too lazy to help out and stood there. In the actual episodes of my little pony she's also lazy forcing twilight to do everything while she just sits in a throne.

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