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posted 1st Aug 2012, 8:21 PM

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1st Aug 2012, 8:21 PM

Dewdee

Oh Pinkie Pie, you're so random!

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1st Aug 2012, 8:43 PM

Nightsky

. . . . .

I really don't know what to say to that, Pinkie.

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2nd Aug 2012, 2:49 AM

reynard61

How about "Oh, Pinkie Pie; you are so homicidal!*"

*Yeah, yeah; I know it's supposed to be "equicidal", but SHUT UP!

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1st Aug 2012, 11:15 PM

ThePonyOverthinker

That first panel is EPIC. It isn't strait from the episode. You made it yourself, didn't you? Nice job!

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2nd Aug 2012, 2:38 AM

Diamond Dash

I love Twilight's face in the first panel. Perfect poker face!

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2nd Aug 2012, 3:12 AM

Braininthejar

I must say I really don't like this one. I mean, the group laughing at the CMCs getting killed off. This IS in character for Rarity, who cares only for herself (how does she channel generosity anyway?) but not for Applejack - the way she was twisted was "an orphan having to grow up too quickly" she might be bitter and ruthless but her clan is all she has.

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2nd Aug 2012, 7:00 AM

Benjamin Lopez

Well, maybe they don't know yet that Pinkie's talking about the CMC. Probably they believe she's referring to other three random fillies. The murder of the CMC may bite Pinkie Pie back. Hard.

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2nd Aug 2012, 12:20 PM

Dewdee

I intended the off-screen kill to just be considered a small nod at the CMC while keeping them out of the comic and now for a valid reason. They don't have room in the story I've got planned. The rest of the mane 6 is obviously oblivious to the CMC's current condition - and may remain so forever. At the end of the day this is just Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie.

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2nd Aug 2012, 7:12 AM

Benjamin Lopez

Although I respect your creative liberty and my devotion for this comic hasn't wavered, I must say that killing offscreen the Cutie Mark Crusaders may rob you of potential players in this tale... on the other hand, their untimely demise at the hooves of Pinkie Pie may also be a powerful narrative tool:

As I told Braininthejar, if Applejack (and maybe Rarity too) doesn't know yet that Pinkie's talking about the CMC, hell will break loose if she finds out. Family means everything for Applejack, even in the Betrayverse.

I am glad to see that, despite this being Fluttershy's chapter, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie also get some development.

So... Rainbow Dash may have killed Applejack's parents, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie care about RD, Applejack may want revenge on RD, Pinkie Pie may want her all for herself, and the latter may also have murdered the CMC, causing Applejack (and maybe Rarity) to want to kill her...

...I foresee dozens of beautiful bloody backstabbings in the final act... There may be a new entry in the "Kill Em All" TV Tropes page when all this ends.

I seriously love your work. Good luck!

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2nd Aug 2012, 7:21 AM

anzul

shit is gona go down when they go back to ponyvile....

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2nd Aug 2012, 9:24 AM

Matilda

This comics, acording to caculations, is due to finish around a week, the week of, or the week after Christmas next year. What a nice and bloody present.

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2nd Aug 2012, 9:30 AM

Braininthejar

Just remember, even if there is a villain protagonist, she needs something positive going for her. Otherwise the drama is lost - if the protagonists are as despicable as the antagonists, it no longer matters who wins and who loses. The reader needs to be able to identify with Someone. I am writing that because you've got really close to crossing that line here.

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2nd Aug 2012, 12:28 PM

Dewdee

You are quite right. Tiptoeing that line is kind of a challenge.

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2nd Aug 2012, 10:28 AM

Rufus Shinra

And now the CMC... I wonder if there'll be any survivors among the speaking characters, when everything is over and done. And now, of course, I fear for this poor Derpy... X_X

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2nd Aug 2012, 12:28 PM

Dewdee

Good idea. ^^

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2nd Aug 2012, 12:36 PM

Rufus Shinra

Why couldn't I shut my big mouth... Alas, Derpy, we'll remember you fondly.

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2nd Aug 2012, 12:03 PM

MeGusta

Well now you cant use the CMCs for a gruesome close up death by trampling when trixie shows to boast about how she can kill a Ursa Major...

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2nd Aug 2012, 8:41 PM

Little Judas

Are you the reincarnation of Shakespeare or George R.R. Martin?
Killing of that many characters and planning to do so in the future...

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15th Sep 2012, 7:17 PM

Rosette

Nah. Martin isn't dead, and Shakespeare could write natural-sounding dialogue.

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16th Sep 2012, 3:23 PM

Dewdee

Amen to that.

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28th Jun 2013, 7:42 AM

Mikex124

Oh hello Pinkamena, *twitch* so nice to see you again.

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