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posted 28th Jun 2012, 6:40 PM

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29th Jun 2012, 12:02 AM

Benjamin Lopez

Okay, I think we just found two new sources of ingredients for Cupcakes.

I'm not 100% sure, but I think that in the last panel it should say "the same ever again".

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29th Jun 2012, 12:27 AM

ThePonyOverthinker

Close. "...nothing would EVER be the same ever again" Nothing and never paired up create a double negative. Although two "evers" can be a little redundant so removing one would also help.
...when did I become such a grammar nazi?

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29th Jun 2012, 9:39 AM

Dewdee

Probably around the time you chose the nick "ThePonyOVERTHINKER" ^^

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