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posted 10th Jun 2012, 9:04 PM

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10th Jun 2012, 9:04 PM

Dewdee

And so it begins...

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10th Jun 2012, 10:04 PM

Benjamin Lopez

As a dark cloud of smoke approaches Ponyville, we shall get a glimpse inside Fluttershy's mind. What goes through her head? Sweetness and shyness? Scorn and distrust? A bullet?

I'm glad to see you're back. Over two weeks without new FIB pages has been excruciating. Guess it's time to see and theorize where Fluttershy's loyalty lies.

Something tells me that there'll be fried, gutted dragon in the menu at the end of this episode.

Also, we hope you add something of the newest episodes, such as Queen Chrysalis. I wish you luck in the future.

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10th Jun 2012, 10:35 PM

Dewdee

Right now I've actually got things set up in a way that Chrysalis and Discord never make an appearance as the story is supposed to have a conclusive end. Although they are awesome characters, I feel that including them would undermine Celestia's authority as the antagonist.

In an earlier version of the story I did have Discord scheduled for an appearance. The longer I kept scrutinizing my plan, the more Discord felt like filler.

Applejack's story will be from Season 2 however. Also there will be some other brief moments from Season 2 here and there as well whenever necessary. Like was seen on Rarity's chapter.

The last chapter will be bonkers and mixing together a lot of episodes from Season 2. It feels good in my head already, so I can't wait to show it. >:)

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11th Jun 2012, 5:46 PM

Snowy

Not poisoned? Not buying int flutters

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12th Jun 2012, 3:52 AM

Neuron

Shy's dialogue in the last few pages seems a bit off. Like the lines don't fit together. That may just be me reading it in the wrong tone, though.

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12th Jun 2012, 4:20 PM

Dewdee

Was not personally too happy with the line on the last panel either. Felt awfully off-character. Couldn't come up with a fitting alternative so I left it. I was spending a little too much time thinking how to write a single line :)

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12th Jul 2013, 4:29 AM

Guest

Bouncing baby bunnys burning brightly?

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