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posted 9th Aug 2013, 7:33 PM

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9th Aug 2013, 7:33 PM

Dewdee

Sorry for the late reply, moving and getting set up properly took a while longer than I had hoped.

Here's some weird ass goodness for you to chew on though!

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9th Aug 2013, 7:41 PM

Mister Tulip

Well, that was interesting. Not actually sure what's happening, but stuff is definitely developing.

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19th Feb 2014, 8:34 PM

Mlp lover

When are u going to make new pages

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9th Aug 2013, 8:18 PM

asd

Oh, this actually clears up a lot of things.

Okay, so Rainbow's original plan was to kill Celestia and all of Cloudsdale along with Fluttershy, because she doesn't care about any of them. However when her other friends show up it becomes clear to Nightmare Moon that Rainbow won't actually go through with her plan, and she will will instead take over Rainbow in order to kill Celestia.

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10th Aug 2013, 11:04 PM

Slimecat

I don't know, something that traumatic should at least warrant a regression to early childhood. That is to say I would have preferred a sah-wy or sowwy with a "W" instead of an "R."

But, I suppose it's possible beggars can't be choosers. Not to mention negative attention is better than none at all. So good job all the same and I look forward to future updates.

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16th Aug 2013, 10:07 PM

nightfall the dragon

After what the Mole did to my loving mare, she is going to get it. =D

I have finally caught up with all ya comics, I'll be interested to see what happens next. ^_^

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16th Aug 2013, 10:13 PM

nightfall the dragon

I sense a Sonic Shadowboom on its way. =D

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25th Aug 2013, 7:31 PM

Benjamin Lopez

Holy heck. A lot of stuff is happening in a single page:

Nightmare Moon reveals that she not only wishes to kill Celestia, but also desires The Night That Never Ends upon Equestria...

And if she has to forcefully take over Rainbow Dash to do it, so be it!

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26th Sep 2013, 2:18 PM

nightfall the dragon

When do you usually post new pages?

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28th Sep 2013, 9:42 PM

silvadel

Irregularly.

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28th Sep 2013, 9:42 PM

silvadel

He posts them quite irregularly

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29th Sep 2013, 11:36 PM

NightmareMoon

Everypony is constantly wondering who the traitor is. But what if there isn't a traitor! What if Celestia was just lying to mess with Twi and put distrust in between her and her friends? Why would Twilight just believe her?

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1st Oct 2013, 7:37 AM

asd

That's the most likely answer, and what I expect is true. However, it's a lot more fun when something you don't expect to happen happens, and that's why we like to discuss the improbable.

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1st Oct 2013, 2:30 PM

nightfall the dragon

I wondered about that, but I don't see any traitor except silly thoughts of thinking each other are traitors. But I think RD was planning to bomb Shy which didn't turn out well. So I think she's got the closest title. >_>

But I'm somehow enjoying this comic. ^_^

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19th Jan 2014, 1:44 PM

yolo

What if Spike is a traitor? Nobody questions him and he knows everything twilight is doing.

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29th Oct 2013, 7:59 PM

PikalaxALT

I take it this comic is officially dead?

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30th Oct 2013, 4:38 AM

asd

I wouldn't say it's dead... It went inactive over a year before, then came back so yeah. 2 months is not a long time.

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31st Oct 2013, 12:05 AM

eLka

Still waiting for the next update... I hope this comic will not suffer the fate of many great fanfictions.

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2nd Nov 2013, 8:06 PM

silvadel

I think the mole is Pinkie Pie and she will save the day at the end here. Then again I thought pinkie from 1/47. It was pretty masterful of her to get the trusted status she did in the beginning and now she isnt being watched as closely as the others.

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4th Nov 2013, 1:15 AM

asd

"save the day"- Do you mean she will save Celestia from Twilight's schemes?

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6th Nov 2013, 12:16 PM

Anomynous

I think that either Rarity or Applejack is working for Celestia

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6th Nov 2013, 1:52 PM

Undef

Probably been posted several times, but:
The only logical 'mole' is Twilight herself.
Who else would be above her suspicion, and perfectly positioned to betray the Element Bearers?

Mane-churian Candidate
This is my theory.

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7th Nov 2013, 7:03 AM

asd

Except the whole first act was seen from Twilight's point of view, and the "mole" was mentioned to her by Celestia who was acting like Twilight should know the identity of the mole. Nice try.

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5th Jan 2014, 3:29 AM

Blarg

Maybe Twilight is a sleeper agent

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3rd Dec 2013, 10:58 PM

Seanpony Renaud

I don't think there is a mole. Celestia is good at head games in the proper cannon. It wouldn't shock me at all to find out that she simply planted the idea of a mole to keep Twilight on her toes.

Or it's Spike.

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26th Mar 2014, 2:14 AM

Princessluna

You are so right

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24th Dec 2013, 11:52 PM

Guest

happy holidays

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3rd Jan 2014, 6:45 PM

Guest

So...is this comic stuck in development hell?

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4th Jan 2014, 5:07 PM

Hazelnut Blossom

WHEN IS THIS DAMN COMIC GOING TO BE UPDATED!?!? THE WAITING IS KILLING ME!!! D:

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13th Jan 2014, 12:44 AM

rawr

I'm still going to check this page every day until I'm dead or the comic is completed. Because it's that good.

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25th Jan 2014, 2:11 AM

Violetfur97

I love this comic please don't end it ;n;

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2nd Feb 2014, 10:42 PM

oajosai

Im serious continue the comic

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19th Feb 2014, 8:48 PM

Mlp lover

Need to post new pages or is comic dead

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20th Feb 2014, 11:18 PM

TheSpyThatSnipes

It seems I am not the only spy...

The mole is probably Spike. After all, Celestia never explicitly said her assistant was a pony. Also Spike does much less to help than everyone else. And Spike has been with Twilight from the start. And who else has such quick and direct access to Celestia?

Also, I know from experience how long these things take to update. I cant see a new post for some time.

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27th Feb 2014, 11:22 AM

Guest

Where's the next one

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28th Feb 2014, 4:55 AM

Guest

Please! I want to see a new page! I'm dieing to know what happens next!

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1st Mar 2014, 6:10 PM

rawr

I haven't forgotten you...

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8th Mar 2014, 4:32 AM

Nostromo

. . . So the wait begins once more!

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16th Mar 2014, 5:26 AM

Guest

checked back up on this, hope you continue.

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22nd Mar 2014, 11:04 PM

Nostromo

I've enjoyed this comic and I hope no one gives up on it. Just check up once every month and maybe there'll be something. Have faith guys!

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26th Mar 2014, 2:12 AM

Princessluna

Holy shit I've been waiting since this comic came out!! I'm so mad I'm gonna give up on this shit I love these comics but the wait is to long also I agree with seapony renaud

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28th Mar 2014, 12:47 AM

FiWTwilight

Oh please, PLEASE tell me that there will be more, that you will finish...
please.....

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28th Mar 2014, 9:25 AM

INEEDMOARPONIES

Looks like the author is either on hiatus, or the comic is completely dead. The last page was uploaded in August '13.

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11th Apr 2014, 2:34 AM

Agendo

well. the author is dead. fml

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11th Apr 2014, 3:17 PM

rawr

Are you serious?

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11th Apr 2014, 7:25 PM

Agendo

no, its my guess ._.

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13th Apr 2014, 11:44 PM

rawr

I'm just going to assume you're right and panicAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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14th Apr 2014, 7:30 PM

badgersex

WHY DID IT END?! NOOOOOO! I loved this comic so much!

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15th Apr 2014, 5:26 AM

Monochrome

If you ever read this, know that your web comic was beloved, and if you ever start updating again, you can count on my readership. You may not know this, but yours is the only true MLP webcomic out there.

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17th Apr 2014, 1:43 AM

NIGHTMARE DEADLY MOON

Really awesome demon mode rarity...

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